Book review - 'Trouble' by Non Platt (SPOILERS)

Last summer I was lucky enough to spend a week working with Walker Book Publishers through a friend of my mum. During my time there, I got the chance to read a load of really interesting books that were in the process of being edited and my job was to give feedback on the plot, characters, reality, and even the cover designs for these books. This was just so much fun and something that a lot of people don't get the chance to do, and if you're a book worm then i strongly suggest contacting Walker Publishers and spending some time there for yourself because it was just so amazing. I also got to sit through meetings with some authors and do some research and write a little bit for a book that Walker are publishing hopefully this year!

One book, though, that I particularly enjoyed reading was 'Trouble' by Non Pratt, and coincidently she was one of the authors of whom I got to interview and sit in a meeting with, also giving her my feedback on her debut novel.What I found the most intriguing about this meeting was the casual throwing around of names of authors of whom they wished could read the book and review it so as they could quote it on the cover. Some huge names were suggested, such as John Green, Marcus Sedgwick, Stephen Chbosky, Becca Fitzpatrick, Michael Morpurgo and so many more. My favourite quote from one of the publishers; 'I spoke to John Green just the other week and it sounds as though he has far too much to do'.

The publisher who was looking after me that week had then asked me to write a full essay/review of the book to send to her and Non Platt to see what I, fitting into their target audience, thought of the novel and I struggled to find a bad word to say about it. The thing that I found most gripping about it, I have to say, was the originality and the fact that it wasn't your typical 'teenage-pregnancy' book; it didn't gross me out in anyway, the narrative was interesting and effective, fitting along with the plot, and was completely different from anything that I had ever read or was even used to reading. So, seeing as the book is officially published on the 6th of March (and I highly recommend everyone should get it - even if it's not something you're particularly into, just, get it. Please!), I thought I would post the review that I had sent to Walker and Non, of which, admittedly, I haven't read since I wrote it last. Enjoy!

Having heard what this book was about, I admit I was a bit sceptical about the plot and the fact that it was a book for young adults. Despite this, however, I was particularly interested in the way the teenager, Hannah, would be portrayed, whether she’d be seen as someone the readers like or someone the readers don’t like, and the way the readers would form their opinions on her. I have to say I was relieved to find that the novel wasn't too over whelming for young adults and the two central characters were very likeable, despite their situations. I honestly loved reading this book, not least because it brought out every emotion imaginable and was thought provoking; tense, frustrating, funny, sad and, in some ways, relatable.

At the very beginning it was easy to imagine Hannah and Katie and the type of people and characters that they were, as well as Tyrone, Rex and Marcy. I think it would be fair to say that every school has characters such as these and so there was a clear image and thought as to what type of people the people in this group were. What made this equally interesting and enticing was the fact that the story was told through the 1^st person narratives of both Hannah and Aaron, who were two contrasting characters at the beginning. Not only did this give readers an insight into Hannah’s activities, but it also gave us an insight into people’s judgements and opinions on Hannah even before she fell pregnant. For example, even Fletch has said that he’d had sex with Hannah because ‘that’s what she’s for’. I also felt that the narratives were so cleverly written when Hannah and Aaron were in the same situation, for example towards the end when Hannah saves Aaron from his drunken night in the pub following Neville’s funeral, Hannah’s narrative ends as she is telling him they can come back to the pub to scatter Neville’s ashes another time just as Aaron’s narrative begins with ‘When did Hannah get here? I don’t remember that’. It was so intriguing to watch their relationship, or not so ‘relationship’ relationship, grow stronger as they became dependant on each other to keep them sane; Hannah from her pregnancy and Aaron from the death of his best friend. Not only this, but even in the most awkward and tense situations, they were still able to make jokes to make the situation easier for each other. For example, whilst Hannah is in labour she says to Aaron to ‘stay north side’ and even while she’s giving birth he tells her to ‘CTFO’. In some ways, this was what the book was about and less on the pregnancy as this was what I wanted to read more about than anything else.

Moreover, the constant dramas and mysteries that develops throughout the novel I felt were incredible and were woven in with each other very well. From the beginning we, as readers, are wondering just who the father is and it is enjoyable to try to work out who it could possibly be, much like one of Agatha Christie’s murder mystery novels! Not once did I ever suspect that it could be Jay and I felt that the secret was hidden so perfectly so when the truth came out it wasn't expected, especially not from Aaron’s narrative. Not only this, but the friendship troubles that Katie and Hannah have are definitely relatable to the target age group as I know teenage girls are fickle and can have fall outs within their friendship groups. What I would slightly criticise, however, is just how realistic the things that Katie does may be. I understand that Katie loves the gossip and the attention, however I do feel that revealing Aaron’s secret and accusing him of killing his best friend to get to her old best friend was very harsh and I’m not quite sure it would really happen. Not only this but that particular part in the story was over very quickly. Having said this, it did make the readers, as well as Aaron and Hannah, despise Katie even more and the fact that Marcy stood up for Hannah and the way she was suddenly against Katie I thought was fantastic. Not only this, but the whole story about Aaron’s ‘past life’ was so tragic and, to a certain extent, heart wrenching. Throughout the novel we had been left with an unsettling enigma – what had happened before his holiday in Australia? Who were Chris and Penny? Why did he need to be Hannah’s baby’s fake father to keep himself sane? The way this was carried through was so enticing and when we finally found out just what had happened, Aaron suddenly became even more likeable and we feel sorry for him and the things that have happened in his life as well as the things that have happened in Hannah’s.  

Another small criticism would be some of the characters that we constantly see at the beginning, such as Tyrone and Fletch, suddenly disappear once Hannah finds out that she’s pregnant. This seems a little bit odd as Hannah’s surroundings and social position suddenly change. Whilst it’s understandable that this is because Hannah can no longer go out and drink with them every Friday night, I think it would have been interesting to maybe see them confront Hannah because they must be unsure as to whether they are the father of her baby. This would have caused more tension and drama and possibly would have made Hannah feel more isolated from her old life and friends the further into her pregnancy she went. Throughout the book, Hannah seems to have a crush on at least three guys and seems to be in love with two of them. Tyrone is the big crush at the beginning of the book and they have sex on a night when Hannah’s parents are away and she describes how she thinks he’s ‘hot’. The attraction with him may be the fact that he is her enemy’s boyfriend and she wants to get back at Marcy, however she then falls pregnant and talks about how she loves the father of the baby, both when we don’t know it’s Jay and when we do. Whilst all this is happening, Aaron is acting as the father of Hannah’s baby and her knight in shining armour and they both declare in their separate narratives that they love the other. This confused me a little bit at one point as I wasn’t sure even she knew just what she wanted and who she wanted to be with, particularly after she and Aaron kiss in her room the morning after his drunken meltdown. I also think that the character of Robert was a lot more important than he seems in the book because he is Jay’s father and Hannah’s step-father. Whilst I thought that it was interesting that Robert became like a father to Hannah after her biological father refused to make the trip to see her, I felt that he needed to be a little bit more involved so that when he discovers that his son is the father, the audience may feel a sympathetic for him and it’s a bit more of a shock for Robert and the readers.

In terms of the cover, I was slightly unsure about it being dominated with sperm as I believe that teenagers would laugh at it and be put off, also being embarrassed to be seen reading a book with something like that on the cover, particularly in public. I did, however, like the cover with the girl’s mouth being he ‘O’ in ‘Trouble’ as this girl would presumably be associated with Hannah. It would also be clear just who the book is aimed at, which is teenage girls. It was suggested that the cover should be shots of some swings in the park which would be the place that Hannah and her friends spend their Friday nights at the beginning of the book. However, I fear that this may be muddled up with a book called ’13 Reasons Why’ by Jay Asher because it has a very similar cover to the one that is suggested. This book has been very successful and film rights have been bought by Universal Studios.  I believe it may be creative to have a pregnancy test on the cover with the positive sign on it as well as the title of the novel; however I fear that this may be more suited towards the adult audience just as the cover with the sperm may be. I also imagined maybe a girl being the main focus of the cover and other people in the background clearly whispering about her although this may be straying from the books plot. I think that Jay Asher may be a suitable person to give a quote on the book as well as Jessica Warman who has written several novels of a similar sort of nature for young adults. I also firmly believe that John Green is a suitable author for a quote because not only is he extremely popular with teenagers today but his books are moderately similar to that of Trouble

Overall I really enjoyed myself and got completely compelled by its plot. I strongly believe that this book will be a great success and I am very much looking forward to it’s publish date just so I can pass it on for all my friends to read. The Twilight hype is slowly dying out, with it the dark romance genre, and in its place comes the John Green novels that have taken teenagers by storm. I think that Trouble fits in so beautifully with this hype and will certainly sell very well.